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Dear Eli Broad’s Copy Editors

Posted: April 30th, 2012 | Author: | | 1 Comment »

Just got a mass email from philanthropist Eli Broad. He is publishing an autobiography called “Be Unreasonable.” I am in favor of the general thesis, and he’s made some interesting big bets on ed reform. So I look forward to it.

Some clicking around led me to an intro by Mike Bloomberg. It reads:

When I was first elected mayor of New York in 2001, I set out to transform the city’s broken and dysfunctional Board of Education and turn around a school system that had been failing for decades. It was a daunting challenge: the NYC school system has 1.1 million students, which would make it the 10th largest system in the United States, just behind Dallas.

Ahem. My guess is a copy editor edited that passage from its original, but messed it up. Who knows. In any case, it should read:

the NYC school system has 1.1 million students, largest in the nation — in fact so large that if the NY schools were their own city, it’d the 10th largest in the United States, just behind Dallas.

You’re welcome.


One Comment on “Dear Eli Broad’s Copy Editors”

  1. 1: Teresa said at 4:59 pm on May 6th, 2012:

    Oh, poor maligned copyeditors:

    “Another downside of the job is that only your mistakes are apparent. The catches are basically invisible. No one will look at an edited article and think, I am certain that, once upon a time, there was a double quote where there should have been a single, and a wise person fixed the issue for my benefit.”

    http://www.theawl.com/2010/07/what-its-really-like-to-be-a-copy-editor

    (Feel free to send your kids my way if they need informational interviews about an underappreciated profession in a shrinking industry!)


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